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Charlotte Pendragon's avatar

Democracy and demon come from the same root word Daemon. Daemon means divider, lesser God demon👿 . The points in your poem tend to validate they are practicing democracy. Maybe our conception of democracy as being a good thing is wrong?

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Clayton M. M. La Vigne's avatar

I see the patterns, and the pentameter.

I don't see this as any worse than when I was in high school, and my grades reflected that I wasn't a poet, but then again, I wasn't much of an analyst of papers for proofreading, and that changed really quickly when I entered college, and is now one of my strong points.

So you never know!

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